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chloe@lemmy.zip to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.world · 3 days ago

I would like to know what native English speakers think of my writing?

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I would like to know what native English speakers think of my writing?

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chloe@lemmy.zip to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.world · 3 days ago
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    The English writing is excellent but the Chinese looks sloppy here and there.

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      你确信你是认真的?The Chinese writings (which is casual speed/style) is also very good.

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      just a little,because this is my homework

    • Grail@multiverse.soulism.net
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      I’m pretty sure that’s Japanese

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        His Korean looks terrible. I can’t read a single word.

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        Senior high is 高中 in Chinese but 高等学校 in Japanese, according to DeepL.

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          Exactly. Some parts may look readable as Japanese, but this is Chinese. The characters are fundamentally different from the kanji used in Japanese.

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